Time to Come Back

by Holly

Age: 11 

From: Hove

Fun Fact:

Holly loves to bake!

“Hi guys welcome or welcome back to this week’s video”.


I am Phoebe Smith and this is my channel. This is a video about an incident that happened to me, two weeks ago. Please pause, subscribe and turn on post notifications to win a vlog camera.


In my vast filming room I have everything set up exactly how I want it, especially this lamp. It symbolises my life as it’s colourful, fun and always brings me joy. My Dad gave it to me for my thirteenth birthday and I have always kept it safe. Now he is dead and I cannot see him, but I know that he is watching over me. My mum left me and my brother at a very young age, who knows where she is now.


I was starting a new video doing my morning routine, having fun and enjoying myself, as we had a sponsor WIX! #notsponsored, when a huge wauwauwauwauwau and * a thud came from my garden.  The garden is my getaway - no one there to bother me and nothing to distract me. My pond and my little allotment, where I grow my food to eat, are my haven - all snug and cozy.


It took me by surprise as I had never heard anything like it in my life before. I grabbed the vlog camera and headed into the garden, where I found I was now looking at a small navy blue police box. The box had squished my broccoli. I will never forgive whoever did this. I had never seen anything so old.


“Who even has one of these now?” I thought. A noise came from the box.


“What have you done now, Doctor?”




“The whole Tardis is on fire.  Should we get out or what?!”


“Yes, good plan. I have no idea where or when we are!”


“Oh! This better be good”. They fumbled out of the Tardis.


“Aaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrr!”, I fled into my house as the strangers did the same.


“Why are you following me?” I shouted.


“Because you screamed. You might have seen a bomb or something.”


“No, no, nothing like that. It’s just, how did you fit in there? And it’s on fire!”


“Oh no, oh no, oh no! Do you have a fire extinguisher?”


“Errr yes, yes. I do, I’ll go and get it.”


“You don’t have to carry that camera around.”


“I know!”


I went to go and get the fire extinguisher like he asked when I heard them saying,


“She might be a YouTuber so be careful in case she reports us.”


“Do you know what year it is yet? You know it could be my time 2012.”


“I don’t think so.” The so-called doctor said with a grunt.


“Who are you?”


“What do you mean, who am I? Give it to me!” he said and took the extinguisher.


“No but, for real, who are you both?”


“You don’t want to know us. Go on holiday, for a week or two, to have a break”




“I am the Doctor.”


The Doctor had a sad look about him, as if he had lost so much. I felt as if I recognised him. Wearing a blue suit and a red tie and trainers he looked from out of this world.


“…..and this is Donna.”


Donna was one of those people who think that they are the best and boss everyone around. She had that look of we are not married, even though I thought they were.


“Now, I would run, if I were you,” the Doctor said.


The TARDIS exploded in front of my face as I ran and the next thing I heard was an ambulance.


I woke up in a small bed with wires and all sorts coming out of me. There was a doctor standing next to me.


“Hello, how do you feel?”


“Lost”, I replied. “Where are they?”


“Was there anyone else there?” The doctor said.


“I can’t remember. Errrr, yes. Yes there was the Doctor and someone.”


 :Beep beep beep beep beep beeeeeeeeeeeeeep:


And now, somehow, I am alive. I have no idea how it happened but it had something to do with the Doctor and Donna.


Ding dong.


Bother, the door, I will be back in a second.


Aaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrr!  Help!!

Just who are the Doctor and Donna and what are they doing? Could you write the middle of this story and take the reader further into the journey? If so, pick up a piece of paper and pen and write, write, write!

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